i marked Krish's weebly page (digital portfolio). His page was very interesting i learned alot of things but there were some errors. After reviewing his page i learned lots of things about him, his strengths were his hobbies, his family members, his pages, and his images. now in theses subjects he got full marks which is 6/6, where as his weaknesses were his reflections, his hyperlink, text and size, how appealing his portfolio looks and the places he has visited.
maybe the reason why his strengths were about him his family and his pages were outstanding was because, he didn't detail his work to make it boring but he wrote a good mount of work that was need to justify him, like i got to know he loves foot ball, he loves to eat, he has one sister named piya and much more. he chose nice appealing images which got you to read his pages and i loved the fact that he posted a video about the football team he loves and how he plays the xbox and things like that.
now his weaknesses were not detail alot, like his paragraph about him was more than enough for me to understand what he likes and what he doesn't though when it came to reflecting on his work he didnt do so well, he just wrote about the criteria s we are marked on which is good but i would have had liked it if he had written things like my best work was... or this is my favorite class because... maybe he could have had also added his hyperlink so that i would be able to address it better. also his pictures were appealing but his font and size could have had been better so that it would catch other peoples attention better.
maybe the reason why his strengths were about him his family and his pages were outstanding was because, he didn't detail his work to make it boring but he wrote a good mount of work that was need to justify him, like i got to know he loves foot ball, he loves to eat, he has one sister named piya and much more. he chose nice appealing images which got you to read his pages and i loved the fact that he posted a video about the football team he loves and how he plays the xbox and things like that.
now his weaknesses were not detail alot, like his paragraph about him was more than enough for me to understand what he likes and what he doesn't though when it came to reflecting on his work he didnt do so well, he just wrote about the criteria s we are marked on which is good but i would have had liked it if he had written things like my best work was... or this is my favorite class because... maybe he could have had also added his hyperlink so that i would be able to address it better. also his pictures were appealing but his font and size could have had been better so that it would catch other peoples attention better.
